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Old 17-05-2020, 20:02
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Sounded fine to me as well, apart from mrsmanics sounding like she was using a plastic cup with string though i'm sure that can be sorted.

No love lost with this place though, huh?
Which is fair enough i suppose but you're on the cesspit that is twitter which makes any negativity on here look positively polite in comparison. I see you're already getting some trolling, unfortunately.
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Please, he prayed, now -
A gray disk, the colour of Chiba sky.
Now -
Disk beginning to rotate, faster, becoming a sphere of paler gray. Expanding -
And flowed, flowered for him, fluid neon origami trick, the unfolding of his distanceless home, his country, transparent 3D chessboard extending to infinity.
Inner eye opening to the stepped scarlet pyramid of the Eastern Seaboard Fission Authority burning beyond the green cubes of Mitsubishi Bank of America,
and high and very far away he saw the spiral arms of military systems, forever beyond his reach.
And somewhere he was laughing, in a white-painted loft, distant fingers caressing the deck, tears of release streaking his face.
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